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Post by xscar10 on Apr 24, 2010 18:19:37 GMT
"THERE ALL DEAD BECAUSE OF ME! MY MOTHER AND FATHER WERE FOUND BECAUSE OF ME; MY SISTER AND BROTHER GAVE THEMSELVES UP FOR ME, AND MKE... SHE GAVE HER LIFE TO SAVE OUR DOUGHTER ONLY SO SHE COULD DIE OF POISONING A MONTH LATER; ALL BECAUSE OF ME! IF I'D HAVE NEVER BEEN BORN ALL OF THEM WOULD STILL BE HERE!" He yelled at A.J. while crying.
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"Don't worry you'll be joining them soon. Ha ha ha ha." One of the gorillas grabed Naki, and held him down.
"Not so tough now are you?" One said to Naki.
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Post by Nakisisa on Apr 24, 2010 18:34:06 GMT
"Ill take that as a no then V" as one of the gorillas grabbed him "Crap," he cursed "V, A.J. Run save yourselvs, Please" He begged "RUN!" he screamed as the gorrilas pushed down on him harder
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Post by thegunner18 on Apr 24, 2010 18:59:10 GMT
"No! I am not leaving you to these brutes!" Adrenaline rushed through A.J's body. He forgot everything that had ever happened to him. He forgot he was a king, he forgot that he was wounded. Only now mattered to him.
He ran towards the gorilla that was attacking Naki, catching him off guard and tackling him. He then sank his teeth into his neck, quicker than he ever thought he could, also slashing the gorilla's face with his claws. Rage was building inside him even further still. "I tried to end this without pain and death, but no! You insisted on pain and death! Well, you're getting what's been coming for a LONG time!"
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Post by xscar10 on Apr 24, 2010 19:08:54 GMT
V stood up.
"Go without me!" He said to A.J.
"I'LL MAKE YOU SUFFER AS I HAVE SUFFERED!" He yelled to the Gorillas.
He grusomly bit into one gorillas head.
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Post by Nakisisa on Apr 24, 2010 19:10:45 GMT
"Go without me!" V shouted, nigh screamed "I'LL MAKE YOU SUFFER AS I HAVE SUFFERED!"
That was all naki needed, he knew they would be safe, all he had to do now was save A.J. he took his chance and tackled the king to the ground, "Sorry my king, you are still weak, Calm down, go and hide somewhere safe, run into the dead lands if you have to" he said pointing to a direction out of the forest "Myself or V will find you. DON'T ARGUE JUST GO" he screamed, running back to the fight
"V, Where are you" he screamed running back, "I'm here to help" he shouted running and attacking another Gorilla.
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Post by thegunner18 on Apr 24, 2010 19:32:52 GMT
"There is No WAY I'm calming down at the moment! Not unless these guys back down first!" A.J shouted. He then roared at them. "go on!! Go back to your holes! Two of you are already dead! Anymore of you want to die!"
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Post by xscar10 on Apr 24, 2010 19:39:24 GMT
There was a huge thud, thud, thud. All of the fighting suddenly stopped... The gorillas moved back up the mounten.
As a small army of Umeachas of cats ran out of the swamp.
"Hold your formation, they must be protected." Umeacha was standing on a rock leading his men.
"Are all of you all right?" He asked jumping down.
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Post by Nakisisa on Apr 24, 2010 19:42:25 GMT
((Another screwed up post, do you want me to change it, or are you guys changing yours, lol))
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Post by thegunner18 on Apr 24, 2010 20:28:05 GMT
The gorillas suddenly stopped trying to fight and ran back up to the mountains. "Yeah, that's right! Run!" A.J stopped shouting and started panting. Looking behind him, he saw a small army of cats run up. One of them spoke.
"are you alright?"
"yes, I'm fi-ARRGH!" A.J fell down onto his side as a jolt of pain shot through him. "I...forgot about...my paw." he smiled weakly and looked down at his paw. He saw blood streaming down from it. Then, he fell unconcious.
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Post by Nakisisa on Apr 24, 2010 20:43:12 GMT
Naki had finished attacking a gorilla before the army arrived. He stood with his back to them as he heard
"are you alright?"
"yes, I'm fi-ARRGH! I...forgot about...my paw.
A.J. fell unconscious from the pain as Naki shouted "Sire" he unsheathed his claws and bared his teeth once again, "Nobody touch him" as he ran forwards, he started shaking him, with no response, he picked A.J. up by the scruff of his neck, throwing him onto his back once again. then he turned towards the lion who asked the first question, and who was obviously in charge,
"WHERE IS THE NEAREST SHAMAN AND WATER" he growled demandingly
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Post by xscar10 on Apr 24, 2010 20:47:56 GMT
"He dosen't look good here is our shaman. Kadoo come help this one." He said as a lioness steped forward to help him.
"Now show me what hurts." she said walking up to him.
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Post by Nakisisa on Apr 24, 2010 20:56:03 GMT
"He's Unconscious, However it is the scar i have made on his front right paw, i scarred it earlier, Long story," he said "He wouldn't tell me when he last ate and drank, that may be part of the problem
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Post by xscar10 on Apr 24, 2010 21:00:55 GMT
(wow I just noticed we mad it all the way to page 5!)
"I'll take good care of him." She said as a jaguar picked him up.
"Now who are you?" Umeacha said as he looked at Naki.
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Post by Nakisisa on Apr 24, 2010 21:16:50 GMT
"My names not important" naki said "All you need to know is that he's the king and im the royal assassin. If he dies under your care, you'll soon be following him. UNDERSTAND." Barking the last word
"Now, where do you want him?"
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Post by xscar10 on Apr 24, 2010 21:29:09 GMT
"Do know who you are talking to, I am king Umeacha, and if you are the kings royal assasin why are you here instead of Heshima lands?" Said Umeacha thinking he ment Mwiba.
"You are on my lands and have no athority here. You must fallow my law for as long as you stay." He walked away with his army.
"V are you coming?" He said curiosly.
V did not know wether to listen to his king or go with A.J.
"When A.J. wakes tell him this: My wifes final words were I hate you... and that is what fules my anger." He said to Naki before fallowing Umeacha.
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Post by Nakisisa on Apr 24, 2010 21:40:21 GMT
Naki ran and jumped on the 'so called' king tackling him to the ground placing a sheathed claw upon his throat.
"NOBODY MOVE OR HE GETS IT" Shouted Naki "I dint care who you are, or what your problem is, but I don't have any problem with killing you here and now, before any of your pride could react, you and your shaman would be dead, easy picking for anyone. And for your Information, Heshima Lions aren't Assassins, They don't have the strength, nor mind for the job, neither do you."
He bared his Teeth again, "You are Weak, Defenseless and if you try to kick me off, you will Die," he unsheathed his claws and pushed them slightly into the kings neck on every statement for emphasis.
After a short pause he spoke again, this time a lot more calmly, but just as deadly, "So then, Who's rules do we play by?" he asked keeping his claws hard on the kings neck, any harder and he would be dead
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Post by xscar10 on Apr 24, 2010 22:02:20 GMT
"Mine." He said as his men surrounded A.J.
"Kill me and he dies. You really wouldn't want that to happen." He signaled to V.
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"Get off, or he'll kill him, he's not kidding." He said through his teeth.
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Post by Nakisisa on Apr 24, 2010 22:08:29 GMT
"By the time he dies you'll already be in the deepest circle of he'll along with all your minnions and your shaman."
he now knew he was treading a fine line, but he was loving it. These things come and go once in a lifetime and this was one of them.
"And I'll make sure V sees every miniute of it." he snarled, testing the wate for relationships.
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Post by xscar10 on Apr 24, 2010 22:21:39 GMT
(I'll be back in around 15 minutes OK)
V looked at him dissapointedly.
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"But he'll be dead, and for your dedicacation I don't think you'd want that." He cought a glimps of A.J waking up.
"He looks fine to me anyway." He looked at V.
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When Naki was distracted V takeled him, and held him down.
"You nearly doomed this land." He wispered.
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"Vary good, you have prooved your loyalty to me once again V." Umeacha walked away unscathed.
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Post by Nakisisa on Apr 24, 2010 22:36:58 GMT
((Ohhh I'm going slightly mad started as I started writing this, a good theme))
"As long as his murder is dead, and his pride exterminated, anther monarch will arise" but then Naki was tackled as he saw A.J. Begin to awake, he hear the king speak "Vary good, you have prooved your loyalty to me once again V."
"Traitor" he wispered back, getting his hind legs under V, kicking hard and throwing her across the clearing, he used his momentum to carry him upwards an land back on the king, however this time he didn't stay, he moved to A.J's side on his way knocking the shaman to the floor, standing above her with a paw on her throat "Call your men back, Or anybody move towards us, and she dies, then you along with your pride, and do t worry A.J. Will live so what's it to be?"
he waited and with no forth coming answer he started to speak again, just noticing the fear in the shamans eyes.
"5..."
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Post by thegunner18 on Apr 24, 2010 22:42:39 GMT
A.J groaned and slowly opened his eyes. He looked around for Naki and V and saw that naki had pinned the shaman. "Oh great. The first thing I have to deal with when waking up from unconciousness is two cats fighting. I love my life. Guys, please just leave eachother ALONE. If this was all about me then...oh, whatever."
it was just at that time that he noticed several cats surrounding him. "Err...can I have a little space here"
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Post by xscar10 on Apr 24, 2010 23:21:38 GMT
(Sorry it took so long)
The shaman started crying.
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"You attack the person trying to heal your king, and you call me the traitor." V glared at him.
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"Who could be so crule?" Umeacha looked A.J.
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Post by thegunner18 on Apr 24, 2010 23:37:34 GMT
A.J saw the king looking at him. "What? You saying I'm cruel?" he laughed and put on a sarcastic, astonished look. He then walked over to the shaman, that was now crying out of pure fear, and lay down next to her. "Hey, it's alright, nobodys going to hurt you, things are under control." he said, giving her a reassuring lick on the cheek, not caring that the others were around him.
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Post by Nakisisa on Apr 24, 2010 23:50:01 GMT
"You attack the person trying to heal your king, and you call me the traitor."
"She is not of my pride, and my king shall live, I suggest you back down. NOW." He screamed his claws starting to leave marks upon the shamans skin,
"4..."
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Post by xscar10 on Apr 24, 2010 23:52:06 GMT
"I only wanted to help you, but your assasin threatened me and my shaman, tell him to stand down." Umeacha Said to A.J.
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"It is true, why did you threaten your recuers?" V Asked Naki.
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Post by Nakisisa on Apr 25, 2010 0:02:02 GMT
"It is true, why did you threaten your recuers?"
"I threaten those who deserve to die, those that have done so wrong that there is not a choice, and those who will demenstrate a point, unfortunatly your shaman just happened to be the latter." he spoke calmly.
"3..."
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Post by xscar10 on Apr 25, 2010 0:13:12 GMT
"Why do any of us deserve to die, we saved you, and tried to heal your freind." Umeacha said, closing his eyes.
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"You are the agresser here Naki. A.J. tell him to stop, please?" Asked V.
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Post by Nakisisa on Apr 25, 2010 0:19:20 GMT
Why do any of us deserve to die, we saved you, and tried to heal your freind.
I didn't give a reason for your deaths,
"You are the agresser here Naki. ((I don't recall saying my name to anyone but A.J.))
that wasn't the case with the gorillas.
2...
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Post by xscar10 on Apr 25, 2010 0:49:16 GMT
((I was thinking he heard it while he was leaving.))
"The gorillas would have killed me, now I wish you hadn't saved me. You only know half the story of why they wanted to kill me."
V looked at him confused.
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"Stand down, lets go, I'm tired of this fool. Looks like we need a new shamen. V go back to your mission."
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"But sire I- Do not controdict me Vivuli! GO!" Umeacha interupted.
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"Yes sire." V said in a disapointed tone. He left towards the mountens. Umeacha left to his swamp.
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Post by thegunner18 on Apr 25, 2010 7:17:38 GMT
"Naki! Stop. Now! This shaman doesn't deserve death. She was merely trying to help. I don't see why your going to kill her. If my condition was any more serious then I would be dead because of you. Because you didn't let her help me." A.J walked over to Naki and slowly lifted his paw from the shaman's neck. A.J turned to the shaman and lay down next to her. "Hey, everything's going to be alright. No one is going to hurt you. Not as long as I'm here anyway." A.J gave her a reassuring lick on the cheek, cleaning the tears.
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