The Great Battle Practice

[tittiana]

(OOC: I thought I should practice rping and since im enrolled in Fantasy RP, this seemed only appropriate. Here is my character-> tlkgoeson.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=p2t&action=display&thread=2464 )

Tocho had always been a respectable kind of lioness. She hunted for her pride and leader, she stayed out of the way and kindly quiet, and she was always well-behaved and submissive. So it shocked Tocho when her leader; Omatikae, forced her to leave their pride -who's name leaves her now only in spite and hatred.

The wind on the Feraga pride plain was welcoming poetry to Tocho. She raised her gray and black head to the setting sun that night; as she recalled her journey to Feraga. It was 4 years later and Tocho was an adult, if young at that. War had spread in those 4 forsaken, forgiving years. And still had not one day had Tocho seen battle in the battlefront itself.

But all that changed one day, as a Burja spy was seen just at Feraga's front door. And Tocho was chosen to deal with the pest...

[Lionsunrise]

(OOC: Can I jump in? You know I'm going for The Great Battle, so... And please just pretend that Alistair's teleportation is exhausted and now only good for short distances)

Alistair ran.

He had been chosen for this because of his eyes.
He glanced behind. He was panting loudly, paws running at a tremendous rate, silver fur all-too-visible against the savahnna.

Damn, that lioness was catching up! He couldn't think- his brain was fully occupied panicking. His magnetic powers were overused- he couldn't fly away.

He turned to face the threat, and roared.

[tittiana]

(OOC: of course you can join in!

Tocho drew out her claws, the spy directly in front of her. She saw the worry in his eyes, smelled the fear on his pelt. She smiled in glory; as if she had already won. Suddenly, she skidded to a halt as; to Tocho's surprise; the spy had turned and was now holding his ground.

What should I do now? Fight him without power and hope that I don't get too upset, use my powers, or run? Running wasn't an option, Tocho's leader said that if she successfully completed at least two of missions like this, she could hope to see battle. So she roared back to the male and charged.

[Lionsunrise]

Despite his fear, Alistair smiled slightly.

"You have no idea what I can do. You can't fool my eyes.
"
His eyes could read her every move, seeing muscles and twitches that gave away her next move.
He dodged a blow to his face and sent a magnetic wave that sent her skidding back.

Alistair's smile became a smirk. She obviously only had paw-to-paw combat powers. Did she even have powers at all?

He levitated himself about ten metres up.

"Back off, girl. You can't win this fight!"

[tittiana]

Jun 16, 2010 18:05:43 GMT Lionsunrise said:

Despite his fear, Alistair smiled slightly.

"You have no idea what I can do. You can't fool my eyes.
"
His eyes could read her every move, seeing muscles and twitches that gave away her next move.
He dodged a blow to his face and sent a magnetic wave that sent her skidding back.

Alistair's smile became a smirk. She obviously only had paw-to-paw combat powers. Did she even have powers at all?

He levitated himself about ten metres up.

"Back off, girl. You can't win this fight!"

(OOC: I have nothing wrong with it, but there was a few things in your post that the admins might see as Godmoodding. Just saying! )

Tocho was getting upset. The more she tried to calm herself, the more her eyes started changing to Fury. Her face stung from the mysterious wave this male sent to her. She groaned and roared at him. Her fangs glowed, her muscles rippled in size, her eyes went sightless as she pulsed up strength and leaped into the air at a height a male lion would only dream of reaching.

She growled, her mind all lost to her power. She brought her glowing paws and claws down on the male's head, hoping for a direct hit.

[Lionsunrise]

(OOC: Oh yeah! Thanks for pointing that out, I apologize.)

Alistair's eyes widened.

She obviously did have powers.
He couldn't go any higher.
There wasn't enough time to move his head.
He swiftly teleported to the ground and began forming a metal spike below her. He couldn't spare someone with this kind of strength.

[tittiana]

Tocho, in her Fury state only got more angry at the lion. The inner Tocho struggled to gain control back before the few seconds that were running out so fast and yet went so slow. Tocho's eye flashed their pupils yet Tocho couldn't gain control! She was crying, even with her power still in effect. The liquid of green glowed as she was just about to hit his spike!

[Lionsunrise]

(OOC: the liquid of green?)

He couldn't do it.

He couldn't kill her.

He had killed for freedom before. But this lioness, this girl, she wasn't a true threat. She didn't have large connections with Feraga, very likely she was new to true war.

His mind, brilliant and intelligent as it was, quickly gave him reasons to spare her.

He sighed, and turned the deadly spike into a sphere.

[tittiana]

Jun 16, 2010 18:31:21 GMT Lionsunrise said:

(OOC: the liquid of green?)

He couldn't do it.

He couldn't kill her.

He had killed for freedom before. But this lioness, this girl, she wasn't a true threat. She didn't have large connections with Feraga, very likely she was new to true war.

His mind, brilliant and intelligent as it was, quickly gave him reasons to spare her.

He sighed, and turned the deadly spike into a sphere.

(OOC: she was crying green tears. I g2g! I'll respond later!!)

[tittiana]

Tocho closed her eyes just as she gained control back from her Fury. Just as she was about to make impact, she bounced instead! The spike was now a bouncy sphere. She climbed off it and stared cautiously and surprised at the Burja spy.
"Why did you save me?", she said slowly and half angry to show that she was still alert.

[Lionsunrise]

Alistair sighed inwardly.

"Because you aren't a real threat. Close-combat fighters can't fight me anyway. You should just go back or I'll knock you out."

Alistair kept his bright silver eyes fixed on the lioness as he ran back to the Burja den. Sunlight glinted off his identically coloured fur, causing a minor distraction.

"LEAVE ME ALONE!!!"

[tittiana]

Tocho growled and cut off his path. "No. You are still a spy and need to be punished." Tocho lifted her head as the sky went dark and roared a signal.

[Lionsunrise]

Damn.

Alistair quickly analyzed the data.
She was clearly a close-combat fighter.
Anyone could have heard her roar.
And lots of other pointless thoughts that added up to one thing:
GET THE HELL OUTTA HERE!!!

"Fine! You asked for it!" His eyes flashed and became completely silver.

"I'LL BURY YOU!!!"

Raising his head, he used his magnetism to call up all the tiny grains of metal. They rose from the ground and swirled around him until he was completely obscured.

"This is IRON SAND!!!"

(OOC: gotta go eat dinner I'll be right back.)

[tittiana]

Tocho calmed her thoughts and did not panic. The Feraga pride would be here any moment. She closed her eyes and used her second power, she was ghostly. The iron sand just went right through her. She opened her eyes and smiled victoriously.
"You're dead now."

[Lionsunrise]

"Hmph."

Alistair was panting. The iron sand took a lot out of him.
Lions from Feraga had no doubt heard her.
But Alistair never left himself without options.

He quickly sent a powerful wave of magnetic energy at her, not knowing if her intangibility extended to pure energy.

Then he levitated up to perhaps fifteen metres and sent the iron sand into the sky, forming a five-pointed star. Except for a small amount he kept "inside" of the lioness while she was intangible?

Well, Alistair, he thought. This is what you get for showing mercy.

The star was the signal.

[tittiana]

Tocho cocked her head mischievously. As long as she didn't move or attack, she could remain ghostly and immune to his attacks forever. A growl on a nearby hill told her that Feraga was coming.

"You should run right now. I don't think that one pitiful male could take on Feraga.", Tocho taunted. Males always had weakness in anger.

[Lionsunrise]

(OOC: Is Tocho a complete feminist?)

Huh. Typical tactics to get him to do something stupid. Alistair wouldn't have lasted long if he let his emotions overpower his intelligence.

He shook his head.

"Idiot. I've got all the information I need on your pride, and very few can penetrate solid metal. Those that do will only make me stronger. Besides, you are not the only one who can send a signal."

He lifted a paw and indicated the star.

"Besides, since you appear incapable of movement, I can simply keep a few pieces of metal inside you or trap you. You'll have to move sometime, and when you do, you'll die."

His eyes gleamed as he drew up most of the iron sand and formed a solid metal box around her. He solidified it until it became a foot thick. He began to float towards the Burja den.

He smirked childishly.
"Weakling. I win. You lose."

[Kirsui]

OOC: lionsunrise, just a note about this: "and formed a solid metal box around her"

That can be considered as godmodding, as you're supposed to either have the other player's permission to do that to the character, or leave the player the chance to make the character escape. Instead of instantly doing something, you should attempt doing things: "and attempted to form a solid metal box around her".

Also, Tittiana. When in the real role plays, avoid using the quote method. It is quite handy in threads, but we don't use them on the RPs. If you quote someone's speech you can just copy the speech and either make it either bold or italic to make it stand out from your own text. Since you use bold for your character's speech, I suggest italic. :3

[Lionsunrise]

OOC: Okay

[tittiana]

OOC: ok... I'll just ignore the box thing. And no. she is not a feminine.

Tocho knew Alistair was right. She had to move sometime. She inhaled and jumped in surprise as a metal box almost entrapped her! She landed clumsily.

"We will see who is the bigger idiot....", Tocho mumbled under her breath. The Feraga pride was just upon him.

[Lionsunrise]

Alistair felt smug.

What a twerp.

He began to worry when he saw Feraga lionesses running towards him. He smiled.

None of them could outrun him when he flew.

He began floating towards the Burja den. Looked like today was a victory.

[tittiana]

Tocho inhaled again and jumped at Alistair, half in her Fury mode. She attempted to bring him down and tried digging her claws in his fur to keep him from throwing her off. She hissed into his face.

[Lionsunrise]

Alistair roared in pain. He bit blindly at the Twerps' muzzle, before levitating even higher and teleporting down to the ground.

He hit the ground hard and hissed. He called up a jagged spike of metal from the ground beneath her. He smiled in triumph as she fell towards it.

This time, he wouldn't save her.

Never.

[tittiana]

Tocho wasn't worried as she fell. She stopped moving and instantly became ghostly. The spike didn't hurt her at all. But now she had a problem. If Tocho moved to get away from the spike, she would turn un-ghostly; but if she didn't move, she would still be ghostly in the spike. She growled to herself.

Neither of us can win against the other. We are both each others match!

A random Feraga warrior jumped towards Alistair.

[Kirsui]

((OOC: Hm, if I may suggest. Instead of making a random Feraga jump on the other character, you could try to 1. get a 3rd player to play that character or 2. attempt talking instead of fighting (diplomacy might help out of the trouble as well), or 3. even leave your character to wait for what the other will do. :3))

[tittiana]

OOC: ok.. ill change it when i can. XD

[Lionsunrise]

(OOC: Ok, I'll wait till you do. Also, the word "random" just makes it seem kinda immature. Not that I can talk =D Also, why doesn't Tocho fall through the ground?

[tittiana]

OOC: I don't know.... I guess that is the only thing she can't go through...

Tocho still sat in the spike. Her philosophy thinking was getting the better of her.
If neither Alistair or myself can't win against each other, and this war has been lasting for a long time....what if it's just the same for the Feraga and Burja prides?! What if they are each others matches and the fight will never have a true winner?!

"we-we are fighting for nothing...." she whispered to herself, a feeling of uselessness had just crept onto the battlefield...

[Lionsunrise]

"True," Alistair agreed. "I did save you before. It wasn't very nice when you called for help."

He scanned the savahnna.

"Given enough time, you would eventually die there, but I'm sure those Feraga will help you. Oh well, I've got all the info I need. I also need to kick Jino's butt for missing my signal."

It was very strange how quickly Alistair put off the "warrior" aura in battle.

"I'd love to stay and discuss the war with you, but I'm afraid I must get going."

Painfully, Alistair shook out his dirty silver coat and began flying towards the Burja den, only letting himself pant with exhaustion when he was sure SHE couldn't hear.

If only his goddamned teleportation had been working long-distance.

[tittiana]

Tocho put down her head. Then lifted it slowly. She just realized something. If she made small movements she stayed in ghost form. She slowly got to her feet and very slowly climbed out of the spike. And with minimal damage too; just a scratch to her side. She ran after Alistair.