my first rp

[xsonarx]

this is my first rp thingy so it might be a bit rubbish.
the main character is sonar, sonar is a young lioness who is very energetic and mischievous and loves to mess around and investigate new things,
but will her mischievous behavior lead her to trouble? will she fine love? or will everyone hate her for her personality? only time will tell.

[Judas]

Welcome. Alright, lets see what we could brush up on;

When you RP your aim is to write a story which others will reply to you may have an already astablished plotline but that plotline might get twisted and you'll end up with something totally unexpected than what you first anticipated, but that is the fun thing with role-playing.

However when you write a story you usually write it from a 3rd person view eg: "Judas, sees a fish. Feeling hungry he wonders if he is able to catch this fish, he swipes it paw at it but misses. Feeling quite misgruntled at himself for losing a meal, the male decides to head off into the savannah to find some other food"

Ofcourse you can do it more descriptive than that; the more descriptions you have, as long as they are relevant to your own character the better. But don't over do it and descripe all the different shades of colors on the rocks forexample, that just gets boring. The boring aspect brings me to another point; Make your post interesting to not just yourself but also the readers of roleplay and your fellow roleplayers.

[electrocat]

Hey there, this is my first RP too!

So I'll say something like....

A young lioness climbed to the top of a large rock. She stood there and watched the sun go down.