Post by stealthf78 on Feb 7, 2008 7:11:01 GMT
OOC: My english isn't so perfect, simple statement. 
IC:
Hues of cobalt and charcoal tones filled the endless heavens.
Ivory clouds would peek thru' the dingy view, volcanic sun being consumed slowly by the darkness.
Flocks of birds flew wildly, releasing fearful chirps of the storm to come.
The wind swept across the bristled landscape in a soft manner, giving relief from the humid, stagnant atmosphere.
The majority of animals spread out from hiding to gather they're thirst and enjoy the cool feeling before devestation would occur...at least the usual african storms (so they assumed it would be usual). It was obvious that it would take the storm time to build up.
Under a rather large acacia tree rested a golden brute, silky mane held unique honey and onyx hues.The young adolescent was sprawled out in a lazed fashion, ah yes...he was a rather large fan of the deviant storms...it was always an entertaining show to behold, at least for him. The youthful feline was on his stomache before turning on his robust side, tassle sweeping the dusk from the earth. His oceanic gaze scanned the area briefly...only spotting gazelles, zebras, and the infamous hippos. Omen released a slight sigh before his velvet yet masculine voice would escape from his ebon lips. "Ah....another show without any company, eh twigs?" He glanced up in the tree seeing the faithful bird that rested in her nest, idle minded, she never replied towards the silly lion below...she was use to him speaking to himself...and towards her, no wonder the feathered beauty figured the majority of felines were loonatics. A sheepish smile extended across his muzzle, eyes drifting in the distance....he would quinch his thirst shortly, or be drenched.
IC:
Hues of cobalt and charcoal tones filled the endless heavens.
Ivory clouds would peek thru' the dingy view, volcanic sun being consumed slowly by the darkness.
Flocks of birds flew wildly, releasing fearful chirps of the storm to come.
The wind swept across the bristled landscape in a soft manner, giving relief from the humid, stagnant atmosphere.
The majority of animals spread out from hiding to gather they're thirst and enjoy the cool feeling before devestation would occur...at least the usual african storms (so they assumed it would be usual). It was obvious that it would take the storm time to build up.
Under a rather large acacia tree rested a golden brute, silky mane held unique honey and onyx hues.The young adolescent was sprawled out in a lazed fashion, ah yes...he was a rather large fan of the deviant storms...it was always an entertaining show to behold, at least for him. The youthful feline was on his stomache before turning on his robust side, tassle sweeping the dusk from the earth. His oceanic gaze scanned the area briefly...only spotting gazelles, zebras, and the infamous hippos. Omen released a slight sigh before his velvet yet masculine voice would escape from his ebon lips. "Ah....another show without any company, eh twigs?" He glanced up in the tree seeing the faithful bird that rested in her nest, idle minded, she never replied towards the silly lion below...she was use to him speaking to himself...and towards her, no wonder the feathered beauty figured the majority of felines were loonatics. A sheepish smile extended across his muzzle, eyes drifting in the distance....he would quinch his thirst shortly, or be drenched.
what I could point out, though, is that you shiouldn't center your text. It's very hard to read. Otherwise, I have nothing special to point out.^^))
It seemed only right to let her go out with a bang, though.
Also added Christmassy snow and banner :3
I'm currently getting some uni work done before heading to the post office. What's up with you?