Post by Kirsui on Jun 7, 2009 13:49:36 GMT
OOOK...
Whitewave: I think you're ready to leave the practice area and head off to the real role plays. Your posts have become about as long as what as an example I do most of the time.
Neo: I think you're definitely better than when you made the first post on the practice RPs. Just learn to end your sentences with dots, question marks or exclamation marks and you should do fine for now. Also, I think what you could do is to cut down the amount your character speaks and perhaps bring in a bit more of what he is thinking or seeing or feeling.
Whitewave: I think you're ready to leave the practice area and head off to the real role plays. Your posts have become about as long as what as an example I do most of the time.
Neo: I think you're definitely better than when you made the first post on the practice RPs. Just learn to end your sentences with dots, question marks or exclamation marks and you should do fine for now. Also, I think what you could do is to cut down the amount your character speaks and perhaps bring in a bit more of what he is thinking or seeing or feeling.
Also added Christmassy snow and banner :3
I'm currently getting some uni work done before heading to the post office. What's up with you?