The fight for survival

[arryuwolflion]

((OOC: This is my very first RolePlay or should I say "Practice RolePlay"
the reason I'm making this thread is because I need to improve my vocabulary
and imagination. So... here it goes!))

Arryu walked along a dusty road searching for food and water. Meanwhile,
the desert region seems to play tricks with her mind, creating mirages of
cool water holes and a helpless antelope dying on the sand. She tends not fall for any of them though. The heat of the blazing sun baked the earth below, barely anything alive would be lucky enough to survive in this condition.
To Arryu's luck, she spotted a grassy plain near by, hoping it wasn't another
mirage, the little cub wearily skipped towards it.

((OOC: If it's allowed, can I post this tread in the "non-practice" sections?
Just to start it off "the REAL way" where others could join in this RolePlay. Is that possible? Sorry, just asking.))

[kyto7878]

((OOC:no first you have ask a moderator I think.))

Kyto noticed a young cub like himself walking towards the grassy plain. Kyto didn't bother saying anything. He was still very depressed from his mother's death. Kyto drank a few ounces of water and politley asked "Whats your name? My name is Kyto. Are you from here?" Kyto was cooled by the water and decided he could cool himself off better by jumping into the water. "Hey you do you wanna swim in the water for a while with me?"

[Deleted]

No it's fine to start a practise roleplay, us mods just moniter it, soo see it doesnt go on for too long, and you join a real rp..

[arryuwolflion]

Arryu looked at the cub, for it's been long since she met anyone. "Hi, I'm Arryu! Nice to meet you Kyto." Arryu tried to keep a straight face. "Problem is...I can't swim..." Arryu's ears drooped to Kyto's question.

[besaniiroozu52]

((OOC: If it's OK i'm gonna be a a lion from a nearby pride. Kyto, do you want to be from the same pride? Or do you want to be a wanderer?))

Kyo looked out onto the savannah. Empty as ever, he thought. Then he spotted the two lions by the watering hole. 'Intruders.' he growled to himself. He got up and slowly padded over to them, taking care not to make a noise. The dry grass camoflauged his white pelt, and his mane swayed in the wind. He stepped out of the grass, standing tall and ready to defend himself. Wait, he thought, It's only two kits. He relaxed. 'What are you two doing out here? This is prideland territory.'He growled, looking at Arryu.

[neo]

Neo walked along the grass woudering what he was going to do today woudering whathis mouther and farther would off whated him to do in a situration like this woudering who's territory he always was a thinker but thease days Neo wasn't woudering where his freinds where he could run away so mouther couldn't give him a bath or even how he could of persured his farther to teach him to fight abit more no these days he was woudering if he would survive until he was an adolesent or even if he was lucky a adult woudering if he should take drinking water or iof he should have the luxry of a bath funny really he had always hated baths it's stange the way you only want and regrent most when thouse things have been tooken away in this case it was hus parents

"what would you want me to do mouther Farther"

he sighed before coutining his jorney to nowhere suddenly he saw the cubs he instatly ducked down to see if he should attack run away or talk to them

"such a hard decision"

he thought to himself

[Kirsui]

lol just to point out Neo, before you post in any thread, check when the last posts have been made. In this case it was a few months ago, and so posting in this is unnecessary bumping up of old threads.

Besides, you are already practising in one thread in this area and posting in more than one practice RP isn't maybe the best of ideas.

I have to admit though that the post you just made is certainly longer than the others. Just... You should learn to end your sentences. I see no dots at all, and a sentence that keeps going through the whole paragraph is not a good thing at all.