Warm up.

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Kamaria lay there under the shade of the bush, wth the hot afternoon sun beating down on the dry dirt, She had fallen asleep straight away after that sentry had washed himself, said goodbye and had gone back to wherever he came from.

Something was annoying her, almost ticking her nose, she twitched it a few times, and slowly opened one eye and saw a trail of large bullants working their way up the white marking on her left cheek. Jumping to her paws, she pushed her way out from the bushes and down to the waterhole where she dove under completely washing herself free of any insects.

Slowly making her way back onto dry land, Kamaria stood and peered in the direction she last saw the sentry go.
wonder if I should just have a little look over that hill and see if him and the pride he was protecting are there, just to make sure how close they really are.

[Nakisisa]

OOC - I think I'll bring my other character in, Say hello to Jata.

Jata stood near the sumit of the baobab tree, waiting to see the tell tale dust of the sentries returning home, well actually one sentry, Olmurani, she sort of had a crush on him but she didn't know he liked her or not. for that reason she kept quite about it. then she saw it, far on the horizon the dust blew up, she could just tell it was them and sped off toward them.

Jata is still young but an adolescence non the less! Is love in the air?

(OOC Post-Release Note - The original post used pride rock, when re reading I relaised this was the wrong land, sorry, now corrected.)

[Lyonize]

(OOC: I finally got around to making Olmuranis profile.)
tlkgoeson.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=ko&thread=2122

Olmurani was on his way back to the baobab tree that acted as the center of the prides territory when he was met by the one lion he wished he could just ignore.

"Olm! Where do you think your going? And what was that thing you were just with?"

Olmurani stopped in his tracks. This was not good. Nakisisa was always taking advantage of his dark fur and dark mane. It was easy for him to hide in the shadows. It seemed he was always sticking his nose in things that weren't his business. Now he knew the one thing that Olmurani didn't want anyone in the pride to know. Olmurani just hoped he was good at keeping secrets.

"You little eavesdropper!" Olmurani shouted. "What did you hear?" He inquired. The rest of the pride must not know about Kamaria. He had just made a promise to her not to let them know. He continued his questioning. "What were you doing on the north side of the savanna?" He said still shouting but not loud enough for anyone to hear. "You were supposed to monitor the south side!"
Olmurani looked at him with an exasperated expression.

He looked over in the direction of the central baobab. Off in the distance, he saw a figure coming toward them. Olmurani squinted his eyes to see who it was. It was Jata. She was a strong and, at the same time, graceful young lioness. Olmurani admired her ability in combat. He liked her a lot. Olmurani was somewhat embarrassed about his infatuation with her so he tried to hide it as much as he could. But sometimes he just couldn't tear his gaze away from her eyes. The deep blue color was breathtaking. Olmurani found himself sometimes looking for her just to see here eyes.

He lowered his head and his voice and whispered to Nakisisa. "No one can know of her presence here." He said sharply. "I'll explain later."

Olmurani looked back at the approaching lioness and smiled as he padded toward her.

[Nakisisa]

"You little eavesdropper!" Olmurani shouted. "What did you hear?"

"nothing to incriminating, just enough to hold a grudge, I just hope you wash your fur again before you meet up with the rest of the pride, you stink" Even worse than usual

"What were you doing on the north side of the savanna?" He said still shouting but not loud enough for anyone to hear. "You were supposed to monitor the south side!"

you do realize it came in from the south side, I picked up it's smell within seconds, by
the time I got there you were already with it, I just followed, for the best interests of the pride.

"No one can know of her presence here." He said sharply. "I'll explain later."

"I've answered your questions now answer mine. WHAT IS IT?" he withheld another comment surprised by what he was seeing "Beautiful isn't she, I just hope she can't smell you!" with that he burst out laughing, he composed himself a few seconds later and said "we had better talk about that thing later or the whole pride will know before midnight. This time I'm DEADLY serious." with that he burst out laughing again.

OOC - wow kitty love! Sorry safila for making your part any harder to play, but I do think it's added a nice twist to the plot!"

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Standing there for a moment, wondering if it was wise to go and have a look at how far he had got to, or just stay where she was and in a day or two when she got her strength back just leave and keep searching for her dear friend.

Pausing for a moment longer, Kamaria grinned and took that first step for her curiosity. On she moved slowly, still moving her head from side to side looking for anyone that could be around. Reaching the slight rise, she stopped and listened, she could hear raised voices, chewing on her bottom lip, she knew she should really go back to the waterhole, but her paws moved her forward, she wanted to see what was happening.

Finally at the top, her breathing was a bit fast, and she halted and laid down on the hot ground and using her claws pulled herself forward so she was covered by branches from a fallen tree.
For some reason she was expecting a pride to be laying in wait, but the sentry was there, arguing with another dark furred lion. Suddenly they stopped, and turned in the other direction.

Kamaria pushed her self up a little to see what they were looking at, and just stared the same they were doing. Sighing to herself, she lowered her head and pushed herself backwards, tripping over something in the process and ended up rolling back down the hill, landing in a heap at the bottom out of breath.

[Lyonize]

(OOC: Here I come! Sorry, I'v been a bit busy.

"Beautiful isn't she, I just hope she can't smell you!"

Omurani hated that he was teasing him now. Maybe at a different time he would have been okay with the jest but right now, it wasn't funny.

"Shutup. I know I don't smell. I just had a quick wash." Olmurani didn't want to tell Nakisisa about Kamaria. The less he and the rest of the pride knew, the better. But he was right. The pride would probably know about her sooner or later. He had to think of something. He ignored Nakisisas question and looked back at Jata.

"Jata!" Olmurani said to the approaching lioness with a change in his tone.

[Nakisisa]

(ooc - yey first mulipost! Sorry about me being annoyed in my last post i was just a bit impatient - thoughts are in italics, previous statements, question etc. are in bold Character splits are underlined and everything else is normal)

Nakisisa

So why is he avoiding my questions? And why was he so angry when I was teasing him? Was it something I said..., then the thought hit him, he quickly put two and two together, Oh! he thought with a smile spreading across his face, he couldn't resist himself, he knew his friend would try to kill him but it was worth it! "Olm and Jata sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G!", just before falling into a fit of hysterical laughter he saw Olmurani's expression, Priceless! With that he fell into a fit of hysterical laughter, completely missed the arrival of Jata.

Jata

Jata!

With that she sped up. She had missed him that day, she always missed him, especially, when she was not hunting and just lazing around, she often asked the king to go on patrol with Olmurani, but she always got the same response from the king, "Jata, I need you here, you are a great hunter and we need food, maybe next time." so she put it behind her and got more food every hunt in hope, she ran up to him and immediately started to nuzzle him, "Olm I missed ...", then she saw Nakisisa, "Oops!" she said then noticed he was laughing maniacally. "Olm, what's up with Nakisisa?"

(OOC Again - Yey 2 stories, a bit of a plot development and future plot, And we still haven't talked to each other properly! BTW Safila is there something wrong with Kamaria? The stage is yours DJ!)
(OOC 2- Hope that's better for you Safila, if you want anything else just let me know.)

[Lyonize]

"Olm and Jata sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G!"

Olmurani was getting extremely annoyed. Nakisisa just didn't get the message.

"Would you grow up." Olmurani said between clenched teeth so that Jata couldn't hear. "Gosh! It's like your a cub or something." Just before Jata got within speaking range he added "There are more pressing matters at hand." hoping that would be enough to shut him up but he just fell over and rolled on the ground laughing. Olmurani rolled his eyes and then approached Jata.

Jata always seemed very happy to see him. She nuzzled him briefly which always put a smile across Olmuranis muzzle. It was nice to know that he was appreciated.

"Olm I missed ... Oops!"

She stopped and looked at Nakisisa who was still dying from laughter. Olmurani slapped his face with his paw in embarrassment over Nakisisas immaturity.

"Olm, what's up with Nakisisa?"

Rubbing his forehead with the front of his paw, Olmurani answered her question. "Oh, just being himself... again." Olmurani put his paw back down. He needed to get everyone away from Kamaria so that she could leave in peace when she needed to.

"Uh. Maybe we should get back to the baobab tree." said Olmurani as he looked back at the hill that Kamaria was just behind. He saw a small section at the top of the hill where there was now an impression in the dirt where someone was lying. He knew now that Kamaria had been watching him. Olmuranis eyes widened. Oh no. He thought. She's going to think I've gone back on my promise.

[Nakisisa]

(OOC - I spy with my little eye something beginning with Plot Twist, anyway here goes!)
(OOC 2 - OK this is the completely-semi-re-written-with-aspects-of-the-original-post-here, post hope it makes slightly more sense)



Nakisisa started to clam down, not enough that he could hear what Olm and Jata were saying, but enough to see something was troubling him.
when Jata arrived he spoke to her, he didn't think Olm would've forgiven him just yet.
"Had a good day Jata?" he said softly after they had finished talking, he noticed Olm growing more impatient by the minute, but he didn't try to drag their conversation out long, Olm wanted to get away from whatever that thing was behind that hill, he vowed then and there to follow him until the thing left, he could sleep during the next day.

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Jata could tell even before Olm answered that Nakisisa had recently cracked a highly offensive-and-one-sided joke, probably at her expense. She decided to give him a dose of his own medicine for the rest of the day.
"Oh, just being himself... again."

"Is that before or after Breakfast?"
She said it with such a snide tone she hoped, nigh knew it would hurt him. she had known Nakisisa a long time and knew he hated being woken, even for food.

"Had a good day Jata?"
"Well I was until I met you." again she said it with a snide tone. With that she turned to look back at Olm. He was troubled, she could tell although she didn't show it. after a brief pause she spoke directly at Olm, completely ignoring Nakisisa. "Olm is there something wrong?" She said this with a great amount of concern in her voice. She just hoped he would tell her.


(OOC - I think we might be needing a king soon! Let's just hope someone picks up the role ASAP!)
(OOC 2 - Anything else before i start re posting?)

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(OCC.. OK Naki.. go look at the Wanderers roleplay.. two ways to set out your post..
1- Reply # 122 how Cheeze splits up his chars ...or
2- Reply # 124 how DJ Simba joins his chars in the one post.. )


You also need to edit your post.. karmaria isn't at top of hill, she was looking and then backed away and fell down to bottom in a heap..

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Laying there for a moment, trying to get her breath back, Kamaria wasn't sure what to think. He had promised her he wasn't going to turn her in or tell anyone she was there, why did she listen to him. No male was to be trusted, she had been there before, you would have thought she would have learnt her lesson by now.

Pushing herself to her paws she groaned when putting weight on one of the front ones, and felt a pain shoot up through her leg. Clamping her teeth shut, she slowly limped back towards the water, not being able to crawl back under the bush just yet, and lay there at the waters edge.
Kamaria lay there feeling sad and stared at the water. Bringing up her good paw, slammed it down hard on the surface, water spraying back up over her face and around her.

She would just lay here till it was dark, and then pull herself back into hiding, no one wanted to see her sort anyway.

[Lyonize]

"Olm is there something wrong?"

Jata broke Olmuranis concentration on the hill. His heart raced inside his chest. He couldn't display too much interest in the hill. Otherwise, Nakisisa and Jata would be too curious and follow him. What to do now? Olmurani had to think fast.

"Uh, nothing. It's nothing. Why don't you go back to the..."

Olmurani was cut off by a splashing sound that came from the other side of the hill. If he had heard it, so had the other two.

"Go back to the pride! Ill go check it out."
Olmurani wanted that to work but he knew deep down that Nakisisa and especially Jata were just to curious to do that.
Olmurani dashed up and over the hill. Kamaria was lying next to the water hole. She looked hurt. Olmurani darted down the hill to see if she was okay.

"Kamaria. Are you alright?"
It was the second time he had said that to her today.

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Lying there with her back to him, she didnt bother turning around and just hissed at him through a clenched muzzle.

"Just go, and take them with you, or have you bought them here to laugh at how I look ? I'll be fine I just need to rest."

Sighing slightly, Kamaria kept her head hanging and not looking at him.
"Go back to your princess Olmurani."

[Nakisisa]

(OOC - OK, time to get back to the story, fair bit of OOC before, now is time to get serious. I Think)

For once both Jata and Nakisisa did as they were told, neither of them liked it, they both sensed something was wrong with Olm. They walked back to the boabab tree In slience, both knew what the other was thinking, there was no need for talk. Nakisisa felt anoyed, one of his closest friends wouldent tell him what he already thought he knew.

After a while Nakisisa had a thought. Acting upon impulse he said "Jata..."
she turned with a worried expression on her face, she already knew what Nakisisa was going to say, she let him continiue and prayed he would ask her something different.
"... I'm going back to spy on Olm. He never saw me the first time so why should he now it's dusk? If the king asks or Olm gets back before me..." his thoughts wandered fir a few brief seconds while he composed himself, "... tell them I though I saw something far off and wen to investigate. Don't worry we'll come home safe and sound, both of us."
With that he turned and sped off back towards the place he last saw Olm go. God's above please let me arrive before they go their seperate ways. He ran faster than he ever had before, hoping that Jata would be alright and Olm wouldent see him.

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Nakisisa arrived, slowing his breathing he found a secluded spot a few meters away from the unlikely pairing. He saw them in deep discussion. At first he thought they dissapeared, then he realized how tired he was from running at full speed over 1/4 of the grasslands. With that he only picked up on a few words at a time.

Go Back To Your Princess
Nakisisa couldent help but pick up on the sarcasm, he supressed the urge to step out and kill her then an there, he insulted a royal and for that it must pay. He lifted himself slightly but feeling like several wilderbeast had just sat ontop of him be didn't move, before he finaly slept two thoughts ran through his mind. The first I hope Jata made it back alright, he didn't know why he thought of that, she was beautiful and they had know each other for a long time, but they had both agreed here was nothing to happen between them.
Th second made him worry, he was a good hunter and gaurdain and rarely forgot anyhing, but he ha just made the biggest blunder of his life DAMNIT! I'M NOT DOWNWIND

(OOC - there was a plot line I have been thinking about for some time. I there are any mistakes in it, blame apple for slow typing and stupid spellcheckimg on an iPod Touch. My next post. May be purely about Jata and the return, (King And Queen?) but that all depends on DJ's response!)
(OOC fo safila - hope that's better for you! Andyes I did mention sarcasm.)

[Lyonize]

Olmurani was stunned at her response. He looked back to see if Nakisisa was behind him. He wasn't. Maybe he had misjudged him. Apparently he had done as Olmurani had told him and went back. Olmurani looked back at Kamaria who still refused to look at him.

"Kamaria... I-"
"Go back to your princess Olmurani."

She cut him off before he could finish.
No scorpion sting had ever stung as bad as words like these. He understood why she was disappointed and angry with him but her words still hurt. Here he thought he had made a friend but because of his bad luck and Nakisisa poking his nose around where he shouldn't, all that had been dashed to pieces. His heart began to sink as his eyes began to tear up. All his feelings backfired when they switched to anger.

"You know what?! Fine! I only wanted to help you and befriend you but because of them, I guess you just wont accept it! I never even asked you why you couldn't be found here! I respected your wishes and I tried to make sure no one knew about you!"

Olmurani paused when he smelled Nakisisa. His eyes widened with fright and then narrowed into beams of aversion as he turned to where Nakisisa was hiding. Anger boiled in him as he yelled at him.

"You! You just couldn't do as I told you! You just had to come back and spy on me didn't you! Go back now! Ill deal with you later! Just go! Now!"
Hs voice rose in volume with every word.

Olmurani was so angry with what was happening, he couldn't see strait. Stepping back a few steps, he began to hyperventilate and his eyes began to tear up again. Olmurani couldn't balance himself so he just flopped himself on the ground with a grunt of distress. He fell on his side and covered his face with his paws still breathing quickly and deeply and trying to sort out his thoughts.

[Nakisisa]

(OCC - I did say maybe)

"You! You just couldn't do as I told you! You just had to come back and spy on me didn't you! Go back now! Ill deal with you later! Just go! Now!"

Nakisisa didn't care. He felt exausted from his run and just lay there, all until he saw the youn prince's body hit the ground. He thought for only a few seconds but he knew the right choice, either he stayed and lost a good friend, or he left, Permanantly.

He got up, growling in pain. Until that moment he had never even noticed the deep gash in his left foreleg. He hated being injured, it made him feel weak, something he didn't need anymore of at the moment, he slowly made his way over to his former friends body and hit him. Not the playful-I'm-just-seeing-how-strong-you-are punch, but a challange, he knew the prince would take the bait, he always did, and he knew when he was fit he was also a lot stronger, but now the tables had turned. He hoped he was helping Olm but he didn't realy know. "NO!" he said as finally as he could. Gods what am I doing? he thought. This would be resolved here and now.

One way or another. Today their friendship ended.


(OOC - I think that post is correct, DJ olm is the prince right? If no I'll change it later.)

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(ooc.. just remember Naki, that even though you might have a plan as to how you want this RP to go, doesn't mean that we will follow with our Chars, thats part of good roleplaying, you adapt your character to whatever happens, even if it was something totally different to what you want to happen. Also this is just a Practice rp, so will probably be just these characters, and then it will get closed a bit further along.)


Kamaria lay there, not willing to face him and see what the look on his face would be, but by now he should be feeling all indignant and just trot off and leave her alone.
He then surprised her by actually shouting at her, and then paused, turning away, carried on with what he was saying aimed at someone else.

Pushing herself to her paws, she needed to defend herself, she knew what came next, she even had some scars to prove it.Her eyes widended in shock at seeing the other male standing before them, looking past him she couldn't see the lioness at all, suspicion made her emit a low growl and she stood her ground.

Kamarias head turned and she looked down when the sentry fell to the ground and covered his face, making some sort of strange noise.
is he hurt, or maybe he has some head problems that make him act this way, sentries are meant to be indestructable..

Seeing the lion move from the corner of her eye, she stepped back, with her paws landing in the water, while she watched and waited, and then she was surprised once more when he hit the guard.
Kamaria didnt stop to think, her claws unsheathed and she jumped in front of Olmurani, standing guard in front of him, so he couldnt be attacked any further.

"LEAVE HIM ALONE, he was only looking out for me, you touch him any more, I will be drawing more blood on you,than what is already running down your leg, my next aim will be to wipe that look off your face."

[Nakisisa]

(OOC - If only)

If looks could kill. Nakisisa thought. His mind was a mess yet he had to uphold his silent vows, he had to save the prince, from himself. He had seen many a lion and lioness destroy themselves from inner turmoil and rage. He just hoped and waited.

"LEAVE HIM ALONE, he was only looking out for me, you touch him any more, I will be drawing more blood on you, than what is already running down your leg, my next aim will be to wipe that look off your face."
"SHUT UP. This is between me and him, not you... whatever you are." he hoped the taunt would work. He almost blacked out then from pain. He knew he wouldn't survive long in a fight, but he had hidden strength on his side. He thought he saw the young princes head move but it could have been a trick of the light.

"Olmurani, this is your last chance, Fight me or watch that thing fight for its life. You know how strong I am, it doesn't. Your Choice." with that he rasied his paw in a thretening stance, he just hoped he could suport himself on an injured leg.

Again he almost blacked out. What am I doing threatening the prince? And what will he do if i hit that... Thing? he thought, ill come back to that later.

He started to count.

(OOC - Just let me know when you want Jata back, She will return!)
{OOC - better for you safila? Just a note, if I am talking to safila I will use these special brackets, just to make things easier}

[Lyonize]

No? Had Olmurani heard correctly? What did Nakisisa think he was doing? He opened his eyes just in time to see Kamaria jump right in between them. Even after what he said in his anger, she was defending him.

"SHUT UP. This is between me and him, not you... whatever you are."

Powered by a surge of adrenaline, Olmurani recovered himself to his feet in the lightning quick way his father had taught him. No one else could perform the move as fast as he could. By the time Nakisisa looked back up at him, Olmurani had a paw on Nakisisas face. Nakisisas reflexes seemed to be delayed for some reason. Instead of a swat, Olmurani slammed Nakisisas head to the ground. His paw pressed down hard onto left side the other lions face, claws digging into his forehead.

Olmurani leaned down to whisper in his ear.
"This... is treason." He whispered through clenched teeth. "You know know the punishment for that." Olmurani growled and then added, "Dont. Make. Me. Do. That." He said, pronouncing every word clearly.

He lifted his paw off the injured lions head and stepped between him and Kamaria. His claws were still extended and he was still ready to fight. If Nakisisa had any sense at all, he would not fight. Especially with his injured leg. Olmurani looked intently into Nakisisas eyes with a deep growl escaping his throat.

(ooc: hope that doesn't seem like godmoding too much.)

[Nakisisa]

(OOC - works for me, just don't forget the after affects. Also sorry if I get some of the more exotic spelling wrong, when I'm back on my PC I will mod - iPod)
(Warning to DJ - this may seem slightly offensive to your character, I mean this in no way, just as part of the plot.)

"This... is treason." He whispered through clenched teeth. "You know know the punishment for that." Olmurani growled and then added, "Dont. Make. Me. Do. That." He said, pronouncing every word clearly.

"Treason! Have you seen yourself?! You sad little excuse for a future king, hiding a panthioness!" he could aware he saw a look of pure amazement flash across the princes face, only to be replaced by anger and hatred "And yes I have know what she is from the very beginning, I only played dumb to see what you would do."

Somithing floated down toward the ground, It was jet black on the light grass. He knew instantly what it was; he just hoped no one else saw it. What he was about to say was not a threat it was a statment of fact, he knew he would be hurt again - but if that was the only way he though snidley Then so be it

"When we get back to the tree I will call to the order of animals, you and your friend there will be banished. You above anyone knows the punishment for taking in an outlander or rouge without consent from the king, Which you are not yet, and sonn may never be!"

after a brief pause where he calmed down (and may possibly have been attacked) he added stupidly, "I suggest you hurry up and come home, and bring your frien with you. If you don't turn up you'll be signing your own sentances." With that he quickly lowered his head, showing a small gap in his mane, "Your Majesty" he said with the upmost offensive tone he could muster. He picked up the black ball without anyone else seeing and spead off into the distance.

The pain in his leg was imense, he just hoped he could get back home, and quickly.

(OOC - DJ, while running Naki could fall from the pain etc. But it's up to you.)
{Sorry about the God Modding, hope this insn't in that catogery, and DJ has my permission for violent behaviour toward my character Nakisisa, so do you, but, Jata is to remain unharmed.}
(Intresting, how does this continiue? Find out first, here in the next post! - Sorry! Just had to!)

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Kamaria stood there totally amazed at what was happening, they both knew each other well, yet were at each others throats, what were they fighting over, they were just sentries weren't they.
No knowing what to do, she took a few steps back and winced, her body telling her she wasn't capable of running, she knew she couldn't stay and put Olmurani in any more danger.

Backing back into the water, she knew she could still swim fast and get across to the other side and let them sort things out for themselves, maybe once she wasn't there, things would settle down between them.

Slowly the water was lapping over her back, and she felt something touch her front paws, looking down quickly she relaxed slightly when she saw it was only one of those small fish called a twit, but her head came back up quickly, when she heard the words that stopped her from moving.
"Your Majesty

Kamaria didn't move, he was royalty, the other one called him majesty, why was he helping her, what did he have to gain from it, was she being set up as part of a game to them.
Turning quickly she plunged in to the water and tried to move as fast as she could to the other side, nightfall could wait, she needed to get away from them, and as soon as possible.

[Lyonize]

Olmurani couldn't believe what was happening. He was being betrayed by Nakisisa. He was going to turn him in. But for what? Olmurani had done nothing wrong. Or had he? The way he spoke about Kamaria as if she were garbage to be thrown out made him all the more angry.

Nakisisa told him that he was going to call together the council to try to banish him. What did Nakisisa have to gain from all of this? But then again, what did Olmurani have to be afraid of. Surely he would come out on top with this one.
Nakisisa ended his threat saying "Your Majesty" in the most sarcastic tone possible.

Kamaria was just leaving to swim across the watering hole when she heard this and she paused at the mention of Olmurani being royalty. He didn't look at her but he knew what mush have been going through her head. She continued to swim across the water while Nakisisa ran as fast as he could with his injured leg to the tree.

Olmurani waited untill Nakisisa was out of sight and turned to Kamaria who was still swimming away. If she wanted to run away, Olmurani wouldn't stop her. He would have preferred that she left if it meant that Nakisisa was going to hurt her otherwise. Which raised the question, why did he intend to attack her?

"I don't understand any more than you do." He yelled across the water.

[Nakisisa]

What have I done? Nakisisa thought. Threatening the prince, my friend. How could he ever be forgiven for this?

God, he hateds himself. If he had never said anything then this would never have happened. He knew what he was about to do, he had the prince in a corner, all he had to do was present the small black mass in his mouth before the king and Olm would be (quite literally) fighting for the life of the panthioness and himself.

He couldn't believe he had ran that far injured, he was about halfway home when it happened. He lost his footing, lost his balance and ploughed straight into the ground. Roaring in pain he let the black mass go. The princes future was now safe, Naki cursed quitely.

He blacked out.
His past came back to haunt him.
He only had hours to live.

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(occ. Naki I have edited your post to how it should be.ok.. You don't need to keep telling us what you are planning etc and we don't need to know all about your chars history. If you were joining with a 'real rp' that is what you write for your chars history when signing up for that rp.
I edited the paragraph about what Naki had done so far, no need to repeat it, JD and myself know where we are upto etc with your char.
OK.. lets carry on

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"I don't understand any more than you do."

Kamaria stopped paddling trying to reach the other side, and while treading water she turned to look at the one she thought was only a sentry, how wrong could she have been. If she had of looked more closely she would have seen how he had carried himself, the way he held his head, it was just she had never come across someone of 'royalty' treating her as if she was something and not a nobody who wasnt worth sharing the plains with.

Still pausing she stared at him, just nodded slightly and carried on til she reached the other side.
Slowly her feet hit the bottom and she used her claws to grab the dirt hard enough to pull her out and up onto dry land.
Lying there getting her breath back, her panting finally slowed. Pushing herself to her paws, she moved back under cover of the shady bush, this time moving back further so she could see what was nearing, but herself was covered by prying eyes.

[Nakisisa]

{just a quick response - I was trying to way in my pevious post that this oils be. A roleplay specific history, if you still want me to post it on my character profile page then it shall he their soon, just let me know.}

[Nakisisa]

Ok this is my last check in, nothing new here. See you all come Sunday night

[Deleted]

OK.. Naki..I;m closing this practise roleplay.

You know what you are doing, if you remember what I have told you about what to do and not to do, you will be fine.

The roleplays open at the moment that need people to join ~
Spirits
Those Whom The Lions Hunt
Okavango

Good luck Naki

[Nakisisa]

Ok Safila, I'll have a look.

If you want me to help the new members just give me "A Shout". -thinks back to a few ooc posts ago-
Just out of intrest, DJ how would you have wanted this to finish?

I guess for the last time,
Nakisisa